why you shine to me so strange
I'm not the one who broke
into shivers,the pot of light,
why you are cold and livid,
so far and grievous?
why you touch the water in this night
and others nights of warm summer ,
why are you hiding on the same sky
with many moving stars,
too small and tiresome
why you come again,why you appear
nights after nights...and disappear,
why you just stay in place
to light upon foamsea
from full shores with storm
why you look cold this way
and don't say a good word
why don't you stay with me,Moon?
Swing
My sleep
is a water,
is full of waters…
deep and heavy,
profound…
and marine.
My sleeplessness
are small puddles
in which I drown
like a sparrow,
hoping that someday the rain
will come.
Uncalled for
Your hand …
is drawning no more
wrinkles
on my face’s fan,
It passed…
the quiet wind
which was curling my eyebrows
there's no more hiding clouds
in my forehead.
Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:42 pm
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hmm... i really like these, too. They almost sound like this book i was reading... i forgot the author... but i think she was from Romania too... hmmm...
anyways... i like your work a lot... also disregard what i just posted in your other poetry thread... i didn't notice this new thread...
Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 4:18 pm
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thank you
...these are old poems of mine,between my 19-25. I stopped writing after that,when I was very close to be married.I love my little work,is what I can "drag out" of me ,instead of a diary.We have many gifted poets and writers here,but I can't compare myself with them..It have been said that my style is too "cryptic" .Close to "haiku" ,somehow.
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